Tuesday, 23 November 2010

Pitching Feedback





After presenting our pitch to the rest of our class we gained feedback such as:


  • Like the use of a nursery rhyme 
  • 12 is a too young age certificate
  • no film outline
  • complex story to fit within 2 minutes
  • how will our location look new and old
We have a film outline to complete which will make the rest of the film easier to understand.

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